Hey bloggers this is somethings that I have been working on it is my moment in time my first one.
I ogled at the amazing sight in front of my eyes. Myself I heard some screams of happiness and people with smiles as big as there face! As people fell into the water the splashes came up to meet me. Personally I wonder what they were felling inside? As some kids were screaming the noise echoed in my ears. A young man raced down the biggest slide in the water park with his friend after made a massive splash as they came into the water.
I ogled at the amazing sight in front of my eyes. Myself I heard some screams of happiness and people with smiles as big as there face! As people fell into the water the splashes came up to meet me. Personally I wonder what they were felling inside? As some kids were screaming the noise echoed in my ears. A young man raced down the biggest slide in the water park with his friend after made a massive splash as they came into the water.
Hi Jake it is Devon from room 8 I liked your post because it had really good discription.Keep the good work up Jake blog ya later.
ReplyDeletesup Devon thanks for your comment. blog ya later
DeleteHi Jake it is Elio from room 8 and I really liked your writing because it had good describing words, next time you should fix the bit were it says they were felling inside. blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteHi Elio thanks for your comment and next time I will check for mistakes.
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