Cautiously, the young man walked up the high sky path towards the top. He was wearing warm clothes that made him break into a sweat even though he was this high up above the clouds. It was windy so every couple of seconds he had to stabilize himself by gripping the cold steel bars. He was so frightened because it was such a long way down and one wrong step could mean his death.
Eeek it is so high, I wonder what he is doing up there Jake? When I read your description of the man gripping on the the steel bars I could almost imagine being there. Well done Jake!
ReplyDeleteO, M, G!!!!!!!! Soooooo high! hi Jake, Niamh from room 7 here. I really liked your "the climb" post! It is amazing to see how a super dull sentence can turn into something as dazzling as this!
ReplyDeleteWas this easy at all, and why was it posted by your teacher?
Blog ya later,
Niamh🐷
Hi Jake
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kobain I am a year 8 at otaki college and I think that you could write a bit more
Hi my name is Joseph and I am from Paihia school. I really like your post because you put a lot of information like the safety gear. It also reminded me of when I went to the South Island and I was on a mountain. Is that you or is that someone else in the photo ?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jake it is one of your friends Floyd here. Your wrtitng is really cool and the man looks like he's going really high! Eeek!
ReplyDeleteBlog ya later! Floyd
Hi Jake it's Stanley, Nice job on the writing. The picture selection was also great and it was overall a good job. Nice job
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jake my name is Brooklyn and I’m a year 6 student from Paihia school. I like your post about the climb it looks so scary because it is so high. I liked it because you add a photo and how far was it to the ground and how long did it take you to find this photo.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ana I go to Paihia School in te Ngahere. I really like your post because you used a lot of words that made me feel like I was right there, it made me feel scared.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you chose this picture to write about?
Kia ora Jake my name is Reminis and I am from Paihia school and I am a year 7 student. I really like your post because you put a lot of information like the safety gear. It also reminded me of when I went to the South Island and I was on a mountain. Is that you or is that someone else in the photo?
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